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Jack Sinzu*
United States
Age: 17
Occupation: Student
Avatar by :iconvulpinekeyblader:
Dev ID Image by :icontheguynooneremembers:

Hi! I'm Jack! I'm something of an aspiring author. I've been writing for almost four years now, so... I've had practice, and I think it's payed off.

Most of my stuff here is transformation stuff, but lately I've been doing a lot of Pokemon and Undertale fanfiction. So, if any of those appeal to you, stick around maybe?

:iconpointcommishesonhold: :icontradesask: :iconrequestsclosed:
Commishes are 50 points apiece, in case you were wondering. More info can be found here: Commission Rules (Update-3/9/2014)If you want a commission, here's the stuff I'll need:
The subject. Be it you or an OC, I need to know who I'm transforming. Personality is a must, physical description and background help.
The result. I need to know what you want a TF into, for obvious reasons. This also includes mental changes.
The general plot. At minimum, just a setting. But if you want, you can give me an entire synopsis. Although I'd rather you leave me a nice amount of room to work in...
The trigger. What causes the change in form. Anything's fine, but I don't like 'being the chosen one' or 'it's your destiny' or worst of all 'it was your true form all along'. Seriously, don't do that third one if you want a TFTG.
Any other characters. Be it a mad scientist, a mage, a ruler, a best friend, a Pokemon companion, make mention of it unless you want me to decide on my own wether you're a loner or not.
What I won't do-
Human-to-human TF. I can understand you if you want to becom


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Contest Entrants-
Written Division

Mature Content

Other Works-

Mature Content


Submission- The Magician's Assistant's CostumeThe Magician's Assistant's Costume
transformation story
As Marley left the train, her reception committee, aunt Angela and her husband Gregor, were already waiting and a wide smile appeared on the girl's freckled face. The sixteen-year old bolted over the platform, doing her best to imitate a bouncy ball. "Auntie! Gregor!" she cried out, pony-tailed blond hair flying behind, and flung her arms around her aunt's neck. 
"Easy, girl!" Angela, a quite attractive woman still short of forty, replied laughing, her husband grinning at the scene, but she returned her niece's powerful hug. "Do you want to kill me?" 
Marley smiled. "Never!" she exclaimed, "You're my favorite aunt, after all. But I'm SO excited! That's going to be the best two weeks of my life, accompanying you on your tour!" 
Her aunt chuckled

Other Works- Grandma's SecretGrandma's Secret
transformation story
Groaning, Jack let his aching body fall on his bed. He'd helped his uncle for hours carrying Great Grandma's stuff from her adjacent cottage into the farmstead's large attic. Great Grandma had died three months earlier, but Jack already didn't remember her well anymore. 
He'd often visited his uncle's farm during his holidays, but he'd seldom interacted with his ancient relative. While uncle and his wife were living in the farm's big ranch, where Jack even had his own room while he was visiting, Great Grandma had lived withdrawn in her old, tiny cottage. It had even lacked modern heating and fluent water, but the old lady had thrown a fit each and every time her grandson had tried persuading her into moving to the farmstead. 
She'd even grown her own vegetables and f
A Magical Coming of AgeA Magical Coming of Age
transformation story
"So..." Svenja asked her friend Chloe as she put down her coffee pot, "Now you can surely tell us the real reason you have invited us over." 
The addressed woman, a tall red-head, eyed her petite, blonde friend with feigned indifference. "Really?" she asked innocently. "Why do you think that? Maybe I just wanted to meet you girls again, we're all attending different colleges and don't see ourselves that often after all." 
Svenja snorted amused. "Oh, please." she said, "For how long do we know each other? This is the first time ever you have invited us over for coffee. I didn't even know that you had a coffee brewer! So there's obviously something you want and which you don't like to discuss in public. Am I right or am I right?"
Chloe smiled

Submission- Not Exactly Mundane[Transformation story for SinzutheGreat's contest]
The words were stamped in red ink on the top of the sturdy box that had arrived mysteriously upon Jay's doorstep, almost causing him to trip when he stepped outside. The wind was somewhat blowing outside, causing a small paper that was loosely attached to the side of the cardboard to wave and ripple, and branches of the neighborhood trees to wave in their own motions. Jay took a sip of his coffee, gazing upon the package that had arrived at his doorstep sometime earlier in the morning. It was already 9:30, and while he would have been at work at this time normally, this week he had off. Waking up so late on a Monday was a refreshing difference in routine in its own right, but he most definitely had not been expecting to nearly trip on a package on his doorstep while heading out to retrieve his morning newspaper. And so he knelt down, setting his black porcelain mug onto the concrete walkway heading up to his front doo

Other Works- An Intriguing Tale[Pokémon TF story for SmartLuxio's contest, entry 1]
Oh, hello there. By the silly outfit you're wearing and the red-and-white Pokéball in your hand I assume you're a trainer, possibly looking to catch me. Why are you backing up in shock? Oh, right, you probably were expecting me to be saying various syllables of my species name and not your human language you call English. Well, see this glittering blue nine-pointed star-shaped stone hanging off my neck? It helps me to speak to you, so stop looking so much... like whatever you would call that expression. Disbelief, I suppose?
...Oh good, you seem to be calming down now. And now you're thinking to catch me, as you were before, I can see. Well, before you do that, how about I tell you a story? Oh, I can see you're interested. Oh, yes, the talking Pokémon on the beach is quite intriguing, isn't he? Heh heh... Well, let me think back to the beginning. It seems like it happened so long ago, despite it having only happe
Dreams of Exploration[Pokémon TF story for SG-Xexon's contest, entry 1]
(Note: as the round calls for theme music, this track has been selected to suit the general theme of the story)
The forest, silent and serene, stood as witness to the ancient stone structure it encompassed. Leaves waved in the gentle breeze mildly upsetting the trees currently, as the sporadic sound of gentle chirping could be heard. Other than the faint rustling of deep green leaves and the calming sounds of the birds, however, the entire forest was silent. The stone structure itself, which resembled a sort of temple though in mild disrepair, had remained undisturbed since its abandonment. Once, long ago, it was a place of research and testing, though not in the way one might think. One group, humans driven out of their society for their beliefs, had found it and understood its true nature. They had since been long gone, but now two more individuals had rediscovered

Visual Division
Submission-Dedede TF by SmartLuxray
Other Works-Eeveelution TF RP by SmartLuxray Abra TF by SmartLuxray

Other Works-:thumb444944912: :thumb428626534:

Submission-Gaw Gaw Tf by VulpineKeyblader
Other Works-Nothing Cures Better Than Music by VulpineKeyblader Green Gum Tf pg 2 by VulpineKeyblader

Got tagged by :iconotakufangirl1200: OtakuFangirl1200, so here we go.

1. Write the rules. (Or copy and paste them, whichever you prefer.)
2. Write 13 things about yourself. (Well, as much as you'd like to share about yourself!)
3. Answer 13 questions made by the person who tagged you, and make your own 13 questions to ask the people you tagged.
4. Tag 13 deviants. (At least a few)
5. It is forbidden not to tag anyone. (Sorry, I'm just a rebel.)
6. Tag backs are allowed.

So, first up is 13 fun facts about me. Here we go.

1. I recently learned that putting chili and Fritos on a cheeseburger is downright incredible.

2. Currently, there are four replica swords hanging in my room, two if you don't count Keyblades as swords. I have a fifth, but it has yet to be hung.

3. I'm practically unable to write when I'm not alone. I just get that nervous.

4. I like making thematic Pokemon teams. In my copy of Moon, I've made all-Ice-type and all-Dark-type teams. Both of them are fully capable of kicking ass.

5. My 3DS Friend Code is 2449-4940-6093, in case you doubt the legitimacy of the above statement.

6. Dragons are probably my favorite things ever. To me, there's nothing more perfect then a big lizard with giant bat wings that can spew energy from its mouth. ^.=.^

7. I take Latin class, and have taken it since Sophomore year.

8. In my small IRL circle of Yu-Gi-Oh! players, my Red Dragon Archfiend deck has almost never been beaten.

9. Similarly, until a few weeks ago I was undefeated in Pokemon within my small IRL circle of Trainers.

10. There are four plushes on my nightstand: Shiny Umbreon, Litten, Sylveon, and Napstablook.

11. My only disappointment with the Gen VII starters is that Litten/Torracat/Incineroar can't learn Crunch by level-up; If they could, I could make so many jokes about Sho Minamimoto (from The World Ends With You, if you're not familiar.)

12. One of my goals/dreams is to see something I wrote appear on a Fanfic Rec page on TV Tropes, since they've lead me to so many great fics I'd never know of otherwise.

13. My sister does photography, my brother plays guitar, my other brother plays bass, and I write. In short, I live in a house of artists.

And now, the Q&A.

1. What is the deepest quote you know?

"By ourselves, we're no one. It's when other people look at us and see someone— that's the moment we each start to exist."
-Yoshiya "Joshua" Kiryu; Kingdom Hearts Dream Drop Distance

2. Have you ever fallen for a character that you made?


3. Zodiac sign?


4. If you had to choose between three of the most vile and disgusting characters you know, who would be the one you'd date in a situation where it's unavoidable?

Flowey, because deep down he's still Asriel, and Asriel's one of my favorite characters in anything.

5. And out of your three favourites, who would you kill in a situation where it's unavoidable?

Neku Sakuraba. He's died before, and got better.

6. Would you rather have wings or gills?

Wings, no contest. Gills can be fun, but they're situational. I can't very well swim during the winter. But if I had wings, the only limit to using them would be whether or not there's a roof over my head.

7. Bioluminescence or vemon?

Bioluminescence. Venom's interesting, but I'm not keen on biting anything. On the other hand, glowing in the dark is not only useful, but also extremely cool-looking. ...Unless that wasn't a misspelling of 'Venom', but 'Veemon'. In which case, I'd totally want a Veemon.

8. Would you rather watch Boku No Pico or read a BL Manga out loud in front of your parents?

I've never heard of Boku No Pico and I don't know what a BL Manga is, but watch Boku No Pico. I can wear headphones.

9. What is your favourite animal?

Are dragons allowed? ...No? Fine. Bats.

10. Cringiest art/writing you've ever done that's still in your gallery?

This. Maybe. A lot of my early stuff's not that great.

11. Best comeback you know?

Of course you'd know when I'm stupid. After all, you seem like an expert on stupidity.

12. Strangest attraction to a character/actor you've ever had?

...No comment.

13. Favourite music artist?


Now, while I'm rebellious enough to not tag anyone, I'll still throw down thirteen questions for whoever cares to answer them.

1. What do you think makes or breaks a story?

2. Does it matter to you if something you like is 'mainstream' or not?

3. What inspired you to start writing/drawing? Alternatively, is there a reason why you don't write/draw?

4. What matters most to you in Pokemon: Stats, Movesets, Types, or Aesthetics?

5. Favorite color?

6. If you could be any animal, which would it be and why?

7. Do you have any irrational fears?

8. What's something that really gets on your nerves?

9. What's something that you really enjoy doing?

10. How open are you to trying new things?

11. Would you describe yourself as cynical or optimistic?

12. Do you think you're more confidant on the Internet than IRL?

13. Do you think putting chili and Fritos on a cheeseburger is a good idea?

Aaaaand that's all for now.
  • Listening to: Assorted Remixes
  • Reading: Assorted Fanfics
  • Watching: Markiplier
  • Playing: Xenoblade Chronicles
  • Eating: zip
  • Drinking: Diet Dr. Pepper


So, I want to write a sequel/follow-up/whatever to "Blue Scales, Blue Skies". By the nature of the story and audience, I feel like there should be a transformation scene somewhere.

So, a question: What kind of dragon would you guys want to see Azure turn into?
For no particular reason... Have any of you guys heard of Ori and the Blind Forest?
Random general-interest thing: What have I written recently that you like and want to see more of? More updates to chapter stories? More one-off stories? Or alternatively, what do you want to see less of? Be as specific or general as you want, long as you make it obvious what you're saying.
To those of you waiting... I'm resuming my RPs. Chances are that responses will be slow, but I think I've kept you all waiting long enough.
Just throwing this out there... How many of you are familiar with "AM2R: Return of Samus"?


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sun4000 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2017  Student Artist
Hello happy Valentine's Day dude, I must ask, had you beaten or know a lot about sun and moon and also, stance on humor~?
SinzutheGreat Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017
Same to you! Sorry for taking a while to reply, been sick for the past few days.

I have beaten Moon, and... stance on humor? Well, I'm a fan of it, obviously, but I feel like there's a time and place for it, like bicycles and fishing rods. It's a delicate balance, since if you time your jokes badly, it only kills the mood.
sun4000 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017  Student Artist
Well, here is something I could of shown on Valentine's day
SinzutheGreat Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2017
...I don't know what to think of that, but okay.
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Zohaku Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2016
Hi, how are you?
SinzutheGreat Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2016
Pretty good! What about you?
Zohaku Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2016
Pretty good, but got a little cold.
SinzutheGreat Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2016
Sorry to hear it. I'm fine over here.
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gameislandproject Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2016

can you proofread this, if you have the time and aren't working on something else
SinzutheGreat Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2016
...I don't see any major spelling or grammar errors. But there is one thing that you should definitely change: Paragraphing. Right now, it's just a big block of text. Put a blank line in to separate different subjects and speakers, and it'll look better and be easier to read.
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